Tuesday, October 20, 2009



My Daughter, A Poem


I am cute and beautiful

I wonder when you will hug me

I hear your voice

I see your face

I want you to be happy

I am cute and beautiful


I pretend to be a woman

I feel very happy

I touch my doll

I worry when you scold me

I cry when you leave me

I am cute and beautiful


I understand what you say

I say your name

I dream about you

I try to be quiet

I hope that you will love me

I am cute and beautiful


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4 comments:

  1. mamiOctober 23, 2009 at 4:03 PM

    Hi Asia!
    I like your poem because it is sooooo sweet!!
    Pictures of your daughter also.Acutually, I wasn't able to believe that you are her mother because you looks so young! But I understood you are good mother by reading your poem!

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  2. ejdluffyOctober 23, 2009 at 4:14 PM

    Hello Asia,
    I relly enjoy your poem that is filled with love. Most important of all, your doughter is so cute and beautiful. I wonder how old is your doughter? Does she cry a lot? By the way, maybe you can put more adjective in your poem, such as " I hear your warm voice."
    EJ

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  3. asiaOctober 23, 2009 at 8:11 PM

    Hi EJ ,,,

    She is 15 months old.
    Thank you

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  4. happymikiNovember 1, 2009 at 6:15 PM

    Hi Asia, I'm Miki. Your poem can express your daughter's characteristics. Even if I've never met your baby, I can imagine how cute she is and also how you love her so much! I like your poem. Please show me your daughter's photo at the next time.

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